Fix This - 9.22.24

If you’re working on a script you want to make yourself, there can be a tendency to think, “I don’t need to write that all out. It’s in my head so we can figure it out on set.”

This is a dangerous way to approach filmmaking. You need everyone involved in production to be on the same page. Being on the same page means everything first needs to be on the page. Not in your head.

Take a look at the example. Can you see where something isn’t on the page but should be?

If you noticed the Rodeo Announcer’s dialogue is missing, you are correct!

These lines might not seem super important, and it can be tempting to leave them out because you think your actors will be able to ad lib something on set.

We highly recommend you avoid doing this. Lines of dialogue need to be written out in the script so your actors can learn them. Although we’re sure you can think of great lines of dialogue that were ad libbed, it’s a risky strategy. Not only does it take extra time on set, it can also impact the flow of the scene or inadvertently change the scene’s meaning.

As the writer, it’s your job to write great lines for your characters. Make sure they’re all on the page...

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